Prompt: Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

 After reviewing my writing i did notice i could fix some things up. For starters, i failed to add the page number after my quotes so i fixed that. I also notice using transitions words like, “this shows” is a little boring. To fix this problem, i googled transition words and phrases and found a better phrase for each transition. 

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